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Pair of EvilàLiterary Storyboard

 

Opening scene:  Out in the forest somewhere, cairn of rocks in a clearing.  Random person (Releaser) wandering about with a crappy flashlight, muttering about getting lost.  Trips and knocks over cairn.  Walks away, still muttering.

 

Opening credits.

 

Return to clearing with knocked over cairn.  Demons come out of shadows.  IncubusàBlack hair (all around), all black clothing (pants, shirt, socks, boots, hatàwide brim), cape?), sunglasses.  SuccubusàScantily clad (if even wearing top), very tight pants (preferably black), wings of sorts.  Two demons talk about being released, decide to have fun.

 

Releaser at home, opens door to room.  Succubus there (without wings), in very revealing clothing.  Sits down on Releasers lap, starts to talk.  Incubus comes from behind and kills.  Yells at succubus for fooling around.  Decide to gain more power with consumption of souls.

 

Main Male Teen (MMT) sitting in living room, watching TV.  Sees report about murdered teen.  Calls up Main Female Teen (MFT), talks.  Decide to hang out somewhere.

 

MMT and Secondary Male Teen (SMT) meet with MFT, Secondary Female Teen (SFT) and Tertiary Female Teen (TFT) in parking lot random place.  Talk about murder.  Two males make jokes, females not happy.  Decide to be careful.

 

Night.  Demons watching 2 lovers in woods.  Separate them.  Succubus entices male, incubus entices female.  Get them back together, start to have sex, demons kill.

 

MMT and SMT on front stoop somewhere, talking about new murders.  Decide to stick around females to keep them safe.

 

Random female taking shower.  Succubus confronts, entices with lesbianism, kills.  Incubus warns about moving too fast.

 

Turns out random female was MFTs sister.  Group decides to find out what the hell is going on and stop it.

 

All meet together (MMT, SMT, MFT, SFT, TFT), talk about where to get info.  TFT recommends local stoner sage.  Agree, and go.

 

Go to sage.  Talk about what could be.  Give ideas as to what it could be.  Based on info, decide to try sting operation.

 

SMT goes out as lure.  Succubus tried to seduce, others help to drive off.

 

Meet again with sage, discuss findings, realize it is a Succubus.  Talk about how to defeat.

 

Incubus furious at succubus, beats her some.  Decide to kill before be killed.

 

Teens make plan to defeat succubus.

 

Incubus and Succubus go on killing rampage to gain power.  Come across teens, Incubus stays in shadows, both Incubus and Succubus run.

 

Incubus and Succubus back in lair.  Incubus furious, vows revenge.

 

Teens back in house, discuss what happened.  Try to figure out where lair is, plan attack.

 

Teens readying for strike

 

Night.  Go for strike at lair.  Incubus and Succubus arent there.  Letter challenging them.  Teens angry.

 

Incubus and Succubus watching from shadows, short distance away.  Laugh.

 

TFT at home alone. Succubus comes and entices, brainwarps.

 

Teens next day.  Realize TFT is brainwarped.  Feed false information.

 

Incubus and Succubus realize ploy, play along.  Have new surprise cooked up.

 

At match house, teens lie in wait.  Incubus encounters SFT, starts to seduce/entice.  TFT comes along to help.  SMT busts in and disrupts, get FTs away.

 

All teens meet and discuss Incubus.  Incubus and Succubus attack meeting, scatter teens.

 

MMT, MFT, SFT find Succubus, defeat.

 

Incubus, pissed at defeat of Succubus, plans revenge.

 

Group discussing Succubus captured, Incubus still loose.  Will attack Incubus.

 

Group goes to lair, Incubus there.  Battle (Mental and Physical).  Incubus defeated, teens happy.

 

Group talks with sage.  Discuss way to get rid of Incubus and Succubus forever.  Sage says he will take it.

 

Teens leave, sage holds relic, laughs maniacally.

 

Teens run back in, beat sage, burn relic.

 

Credits.

 

Incubus:  Garrett

Succubus:

MMT:

MFT:

SMT:
SFT:

TFT:

Sage:

Random others:


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